Not too bad, what I expected
That was very good, sorry to say it, but, the graphics werent of the best quality, also the sound was horrible, you need better microphones, speakers, or something! Also this had little story line, hopefully you can try and brush up on nearly everything a few times before you submit the actual thing! You tried hard as it looks, so I voted nicely, I gave you a four out of ten on the overall reviewing votes, and also a two out of five on the portal voting, since im nice and all :) Best of luck on your future flashes! This was was... commendable i suppose.
-jamie